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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2002-12-19 08:10 PM


“LAST NIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
We lied together until the sleepy dawn,
your touch sincere through the night,
mine of many tender loving caresses,
with whispers in your ear by candlelight…

Neither slept snuggling under the blankets,
knowing the warmth, each the abductor,
passions taken, passions learned with you,
teaching me like a tender wildflower…

Last night learning your many tender delights,
wanting it to last, not wanting to let you go,
I did when the morning light showed through,
but I’ll be waiting again, for tonight’s shadow…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2002-12-19 08:31 PM


Bill, you write the best romantic poetry. This is just lovely.
vandana
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2 posted 2002-12-19 08:32 PM


nice
Magnus
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3 posted 2002-12-19 09:01 PM


A shadow BC?  Great write....may the darkness
be the light,  and the shadow whisper of
love this night..

regards2you
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4 posted 2002-12-19 10:14 PM



Bill,

Another lovely romantic write. Enjoyed!


Warm regards,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-12-19 10:34 PM


Oh so warmly romantic Bill.
Love this....
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Laney
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since 2002-12-18
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6 posted 2002-12-19 10:56 PM


Another beautiful romantic poem for all of us to treasure!  You are so good at this, I bet all your former lovers were always tinkled pink!!  Good Job!!

--Alana

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-12-20 03:56 AM


you're so mushy! LOL
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8 posted 2002-12-20 03:59 AM




(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your golden heart always shines with pure romance! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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