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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-02-03 10:12 PM



We dance an unconventional waltz
The spans of said soak soothing salts
As heartstrings strummed on wings
Where you lead, there my heart sings

We are calloused and weather weary
In dessert before dinner ideal and theory
By the current that pulls core to shore
Where you lead, every moment adore

We might squabble an uncertain tune
Yet become hedge to edge willing soon
In a mighty and powerful pull
Where you lead, there I drink until full

We are there for each other indeed
There is never unnoticed a need
And admire each moment aglow
Where you lead, shall I happily go


Copyright Kkh 2/3/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-03 10:17 PM


Very very nice Kathleen!
This is wonderful read aloud.
Much enjoyed tonight.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-03 10:25 PM




(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as love can always lead the way and follow the leader is what it feels! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderfully moving, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie
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3 posted 2003-02-03 11:15 PM


TD...Your usual beautiful rhythm and rhyme, and sounds like a good thing called love.  Enjoyed!
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4 posted 2003-02-04 01:45 AM


Kathleen, I enjoyed reading this. Almost missed it,
too, it seems. I'm sure glad that I didn't miss it, though.
It's really beautiful...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-02-04 02:46 AM


a very sensitive write...
regards2you
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6 posted 2003-02-04 04:35 AM



I love this. It's simply the way it should be...love, trust, abandonment and surrender in all the most perfect ways.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-02-04 07:13 AM


nice and loving,
without the pain and anxst of love,
nice to read for a change of pace on here

SmartChick
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8 posted 2003-02-04 07:49 AM


Beautiful poem, Kathaleen. Sounds to me like you're in love.
BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2003-02-04 11:41 PM


We might squabble an uncertain tune
Yet become hedge to edge willing soon
In a mighty and powerful pull

Give and take is like the salt of the earth and the truest measure of love~

You write with such a nice touch TD~

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