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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-12-16 06:09 AM



Mother Nature Rising
          
Blue sky songs float down
from the heavens above,
pierced by the sounds of
silver tipped birds flying into
unknown destinies.
Red fireball sun rises
above a painted canvas
of yellows, greens and blues.
Gentle breezes blow
from angels whispering
as they float among
cotton candy clouds.
Earth awakens with
mother nature rising


©dmsmith 08-2000

revision 12-16-02


I know that you can 'read' me
but can you  'hear'  "me"?



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-16-2002 06:41 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-12-16 06:37 AM



Enjoying this one!

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2 posted 2002-12-16 09:24 AM


Dawn...life.....great.
Ada'doLisdo'ti
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3 posted 2002-12-16 09:38 AM


Lovely

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-12-16 12:34 PM



Poem and photo put me in a pretty place!

Clouds appear to be in the shapes of an angel and a dove! Both the poem and the picture are spectacular.

~ warm hugs, Dear One

Linda

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5 posted 2002-12-16 01:21 PM


Donna, you brightened my day with your poem and picture. It's just heavenly.

Hugs, Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-12-16 01:23 PM


Beautiful Donna!!
~Love & Peace~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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7 posted 2002-12-16 01:31 PM


*sitting with mouth dropped open onto keyboard*
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2002-12-16 01:39 PM


Thanks to all.  That is one of my fav pictures also.  You can find it at www.espectro.com
Dixie woman pick your mouth up!!  LOL
Thanks sweetie, I appreciate that so very much.

gemjop
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9 posted 2002-12-16 01:43 PM


that brightened up my gloomy day, with beautiful colour and pictures! thankyou!
lots of love gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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10 posted 2002-12-16 01:45 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, and may the morning angels always bring whispers of joy to you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-12-16 01:49 PM


   you are so lovely.....I miss you so much....be well Happy Hollidays...




Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

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12 posted 2002-12-16 01:50 PM




Ah, gifts given, we too often take for granted. Thanks for this  gentle reminder with beutiful pic and words..
Hugs and warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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13 posted 2002-12-16 07:10 PM


My favorite time of day, you've painted it so beautifully, enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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14 posted 2002-12-16 07:13 PM



Gentle Spirit~
A lovely write and a very enjoyable read.
Beautifully penned, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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15 posted 2002-12-16 07:21 PM


Donna - Ya gotta love those "cotton candy clouds." Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Robert Adamson
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16 posted 2002-12-17 08:39 PM


A totally well balanced poem with a heavenly kick. Thank you.

etoodog

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