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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2003-02-01 12:19 PM



Left me in a state of dismay
My thoughts were all a lie
Qustions that I thought were awnsered
Remain encaged inside

I felt something that wasn't returned
And it eats me alive
And Im powerless to do anything
When anything is all I want from you

But am I falling into that trap
Where I look instead of find
Will this haunt me all my life?
Or can I controll my state of mind?

Do I need you?, Did I want you?
I never know what to feel
But the direction is getting clearer
And Im able to see that now is not my time!

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-02-01 12:23 PM


a tinging pain in this one..
one of those ones that kind of aches with a sting.
I like it though

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-01 04:09 AM


an ache I know well
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