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jellybeans
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0 posted 2003-01-31 03:29 PM


Oh how we would fly if only
we both had wings instead of
just you and not I.

But there are already
far too many should have been’s
and would have been’s
and might have’s too...
if only there weren’t.

If only the words
I love you always equaled
their meaning

And while we are at this if
only business, could someone
figure out how to smooth
off some of life’s rough
edges? I, for one, am  
bruised and bleeding.

I think a rope round if only's
ankles and a toss deep down
river, might just do my
reality a world of
good...

if only.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (01-31-2003 03:29 PM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-01-31 03:49 PM


if only... big phrase with so few letters...

enjoyed this...and the thoughts with it. lesson perhaps for us all here... if only can strangle us..

suthern
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2 posted 2003-01-31 04:21 PM


If only my first response wasn't AMEN! *G*

I understand all too well... and love the way you've written it...

Now the phrase "one and only"... that one brings a smile! LOL

regards2you
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3 posted 2003-01-31 06:45 PM




Smiling here at Southern's last reply, I think she's related to Toe....


I like this a lot. Glad to see you're posting. You have a distinct style and always a message.....I like how you write.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-02-01 04:39 AM


always love reading you...
HopeS
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5 posted 2003-02-01 05:59 AM


excellently expressed , yes in life we go through plenty of "If Only's
Hope

Sandpiper
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6 posted 2003-02-01 07:46 AM


If only the words
I love you always equaled
their meaning


ah yes, "if only"...sad and beautiful--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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7 posted 2003-02-03 12:08 PM


regards: ROFL... if only!!! LOL
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