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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-30 03:39 PM


Beauty

beauty
started in
your mouth
breath
that could not
escape me
and warmed
my soul
then words
that stirred
my heart
as I
watched
your lips
did I
hear all
you said
it mattered not
for they
touched me
in beauty

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-01-30 03:55 PM


Wonderful Helen!
Very very beautiful!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-01-30 05:27 PM


beauty..is never simple... though it is found in things that can be deceptively simple looking....

enjoyed this... as usual.

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2003-01-30 09:40 PM


Beautiful indeed...

majnu
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4 posted 2003-01-30 10:08 PM


its all about you.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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