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Poetic Bard
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0 posted 2003-01-29 01:53 PM


~Bard Dance~

Dance to see,
Dance to remember,
To show that we,
Never forget how to weave,
The words,
That are so oft forgot,
With steps mesmerizing,
We dance the dance,
The dance of old,
The dance of yore,
The,
Bard dance,
To weave words,
Through motion,
The poetry of motion,
The singing step,
Step to beat,
Beat to meet the strings of story,
To dance the,
Bard dance.

         Anyway, just somethin' off the top o' my head, don' know if it makes any sense, but, tell me what you all think.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

© Copyright 2003 Joel J. Harrington - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-01-29 06:00 PM


I love the imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

GG
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2 posted 2003-01-29 07:53 PM


keep dancing!!

I enjoyed this alot

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-29 07:56 PM


Joel, I like it...seemed like I was dancing while reading....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Poetic Bard
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4 posted 2003-01-29 07:59 PM


This is my favorite one, I love to dance.  But its funny, only the words dare to dance, never any person.  But, I'm glad you all enjoyed it, like I said, its my favorite one.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

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5 posted 2003-01-30 02:31 AM


I'm there, jiggin'!
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