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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-01-29 12:11 PM


With all the world I want to share
this loving poem I read
My Love's the one who wrote it
and I love what he said

"Fingertips" is the title
his poems are filled with emotion
In each of his loving words
I feel his deep devotion

He says there's much he'd like to say
but words won't reach his lips
So would I let him do the talking
with just his fingertips

He goes into much detail
of his message he wants to convey
With his fingertips and kisses
he'll tell me what he has to say

We know we're very blessed
my dear sweet love and I
We write each other poetry
with a loving sigh

We found our love together
so sensitive and sweet
We love each other so deeply
and are so happy we did meet

For the rest of our lives
we know together we will be
Loving, singing, smiling
and writing each other poetry

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(reposted and slightly revised)

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-29-2003 12:16 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-29 01:06 PM



How nice to be able to write and share poetry with your love. That is something to treasure. My last long-term love's mother was an Professor of English...You can bet he he could write a proper sentence, but kinda shut down poetically speaking,   Just too rigid....sadly...in that regard...

Glad for you,  

Hugs, Pat  

  


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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2 posted 2003-01-29 02:00 PM


I really enjoyed reading this piece.  Full of compassion and love.  Brings a warm filling to my heart.  Thank you for posting it.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

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3 posted 2003-01-29 02:07 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, keep on writing to your love as I hope soon Gary will start posting too, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-01-29 02:18 PM


Love and poetry - What better combination is there??...
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5 posted 2003-01-29 02:45 PM


a poem about a poem...neat! and you should write each other poetry both in words and in expression
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6 posted 2003-01-29 03:54 PM


How nice that you two can communicate  your love for one another through poetry.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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7 posted 2003-01-29 05:03 PM


yep, that'll do it for me, a man who knows how to write, ive always been a sucker for that, that and a couple of other things, which i won't soil this white with
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8 posted 2003-01-29 05:34 PM


Yeah, Pat...
It seems a lot of men would probably be able to write more poetry.
They probably would write it if they weren't so afraid that writing poetry isn't
"macho" and that
women wouldn't like them then. If only they knew....Huh?
Thanks for your comments....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-01-29 05:41 PM


Joel,
Thank you for reading my poem and replying.
I'm really glad that you liked it.  
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Noah,
Thank you for reading and for your reply.
Yeah, I wish that Gary could get a computer
so he could post his poems. He sent me two
more today that he had written. He is really
a good writer. He can even write stories.
He also is an artist. Some of his drawings and
paintings are amazingly good.  
Okay, I'll quit bragging on him...for now anyway....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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10 posted 2003-01-29 05:46 PM


He says there's much he'd like to say
but words won't reach his lips
So would I let him do the talking
with just his fingertips

He goes into much detail
of his message he wants to convey
With his fingertips and kisses
he'll tell me what he has to say

We know we're very blessed
my dear sweet love and I
We write each other poetry
with a loving sigh
==============================

muses in love...what could be better?
lovely romantic write Poetess Ethel

Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky.
We fell them down and turn them into paper that
we may record our emptiness.

K.G.

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11 posted 2003-01-29 05:51 PM


Nan,
You're right...there is no better
combination!!!!!
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Ruth,
Uh-huh....we do write each other poetry
in words as well as expression.....
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Thank you both for reading and replying.
I really appreciate it....

~Ethel~

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12 posted 2003-01-29 06:36 PM


Michael,
Thank you so much for reading and for your
nice comments. I really do appreciate it.....
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Michele,
I appreciate you reading and
replying to our poem...........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-01-29 07:06 PM


Thank you very much, Janet Marie. I love
it when you reply the way you do....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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14 posted 2003-01-30 04:58 PM


Oh Ethel i have missed you friend. Isn't getting poetry from someone you love, the most precious present ever!? i love it. Gary sounds like a very talented man indeed. The creative ones are always the best eh?
i'm so glad he says such loving things to you, you deserve it!
found much happiness reading this Ethel Mae - yep, read in a thread it was your middle name, and it sounded sooooo pretty i just had to keep saying it in my head. ha ha. my mothers mum was called May. But i prefer it Mae. anyway. i'll stop rambling on.
   Good to see you!

lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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15 posted 2003-01-30 05:18 PM


enjoyed
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16 posted 2003-01-30 05:39 PM


Ethel is Gary's girl and Gary is Ethel's guy! You two are a lovely poetic and romantic pair of love birds! May you both continue to sing your love songs to each other--and share them with us!

Warm hugs,
Linda


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17 posted 2003-01-30 10:21 PM


Very beautiful and very romantic, Ethel!
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18 posted 2003-01-31 01:14 AM


Hello, Gemma  

It's good to see you. I've missed you and your poems.......
and your up-lifting replies. You know exactly how I feel
about my Gary........
.
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Yeah, that's my name. My parents still call me "Ethel Mae". You know
in the South lots of folks are called two names.....like "Billy Bob"
and "Linda Faye", and "Ethel Mae"...
I wonder why that is???HaHa!! Anyway, I've been kidded a lot
about my name. Well, I'd better quit rambling, too. I'll talk
to you later, friend....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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19 posted 2003-01-31 01:29 AM


Oh, Gemma?
I love those hearts and the little pink thingy with the hearts, too..

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Vandana,
I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. I thank you for reading and replying..

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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20 posted 2003-01-31 01:35 AM


Well hello, Linda  
It's really good to see you here.
Yeah, I'm his and he's mine.......and we plan on it staying
like that...HeeHee!!!!
I love it when he writes poetry for me.
He can sing, too, and play a guitar. I've got a guitar, but
don't play very well. I used to sing with a quartet, though, so
I guess we'll keep singing to each other, too...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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21 posted 2003-01-31 01:38 AM


Thank you so much, Denise, for reading my poem....
and for your nice comments. I really appreciate it......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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