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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-01-28 12:30 PM


What comes from ground frozen like death
When heart does pound and pants your breath
Billows from skin white as the snow
You’re standing in and no place to go
With wind shiver you grow too week
Bare trees quiver horizon bleak
What goes to ground and hide in snow
Makes not a sound warmth lost to know.

Gloom


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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-01-28 12:34 PM


Prof....you must be cold...BRRRRR.....
Hope you get warm, soon...
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Hey, go put some of your talented words on
Sunshine's "choka chain"....let's keep it going!!! Thanks.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-28-2003 12:35 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-01-28 12:43 PM


Professor,
My guess would be, desire.

Nan
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3 posted 2003-01-28 01:13 PM


A little warmth right now would be a very good thing... Indeed...
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-01-28 01:14 PM


I would say Youth
regards2you
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5 posted 2003-01-28 01:23 PM





Always,  ~indifference~ It can't get any colder than that....

though trying to connect white skin...
of the doer or the doee? Have to go read again....


Can't imagine anyone feeling that way about you....smiling here, Pat  




..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-28-2003 01:29 PM).]

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