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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I sit wondering why with us you could not stay. I know with us you would be if you had your way I have to believe you are so much better off. That you are in heaven on clouds so soft. Sometimes with you i so long to be. When i get to heaven your face i will see. For now you are happy with loved ones that passed on before. All of you have wing's and like a bird you can soar. [This message has been edited by carol (01-27-2003 01:42 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
carol Welcome, you will enjoy it here. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to Passions....check your e-mail for a special greeting. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family!! We're glad you decided to join us (thanks Ethel)...please check your email for a special greeting.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, hello, Carol  I'm glad to see that you finally posted one of your poems. I know that you've been reading here for a very long time. I know that you will love it here, just like I do. Oh, and.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY, FRIEND  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-27-2003 01:55 PM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
seymour Tabin,Thanks for the reply i am sure i will enjoy it here |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
carol - Welcome to Passions!! I hope to see more of your writings. Enjoy yourself here. Liked your first post. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Oh Carol, this is such a tender and compassionate debut, sweet friend, this made me cry as I know now his spirit will be free and he will always guide you with his love and will always be the brother of your heart, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Carol, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carol, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
charism, Thank you for your reply iam sure i am going to enjoy everyones poems [This message has been edited by carol (01-27-2003 03:24 PM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
poet devine, Thanks for your replyi am already enjoying being here [This message has been edited by carol (01-27-2003 03:23 PM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
garysgirl, thank you for inviting me glad you enjoyed the poem |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
nightshade,thanks for the reply and for the welcome.I am sure iam going to enjoy being here |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
mistletoe Angel,thanks for the sweet reply i feel alittle better after writing it |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Carol. I'm glad that Ethel said, "come with me..." for she has a loving heart, and giving ways. Enjoy yourself. Karilea |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
sunshine,thanks for your reply, yes Ethel has a very big heart. I enjoy having her as a friend |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Carol. I like having you for a friend, too We sure do laugh a lot sometimes, don't we......and have also cried a lot, too. Guess that's what friends are for. Huh?....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Excellent first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. I'm so glad Ethel showed you the way here. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Enchantress,glad you enjoyed the poem looking forward to being here |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
This was a sad melodic verse which I really enjoyed! Good poem, and glad to see you join Passions! Welcome to this poetic niche on the net. |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Lady Sofia,thanks for the comments.yes it was sad. Its been 8 years since my brother passed away and i still get sad about it. |
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