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kaile
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0 posted 2003-01-25 10:16 AM


I used to scoff concepts
like self-awareness
and personal growth,
dismissing them as
hyped-up buzz words
that unnecessarily
complicate living

I might have felt like
an overhead bridge that
no one cares enough about,
preferring to jaywalk instead

Or I might have been more like
an omnipresent thorn,
who merrily causes people
to bleed away their self-worth

But I was certainly
a restless digger
who worked hard
at unearthing his self,
which was imprisoned
behind a cheery facade, cautiously
nurtured by the guardian devils
of Insecurity and Perplexity

Having embraced Adulthood,
I ditch the need to be
a wishy-washy snake
or to cultivate myself to be
a pretentious onion

I am now a fan of such buzz words

[This message has been edited by kaile (01-25-2003 11:40 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-25 11:09 AM


Yes, but you can still jaywalk sometimes and get to the same destination.
Great imagery here, kaile.

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2 posted 2003-01-25 11:28 AM


kaile
We ever cease to change, enjoyed.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-25 11:33 AM


Kaile, sounds like you've grown some....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-01-25 11:34 AM




Kaile,

Congratulations!

Liked this poem very much. Spiritual, mental and emotional growth is so very important. Not all of it hurts...and some even happens naturally....smiling here.

Hugs, Pat  


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-25-2003 12:01 PM).]

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-01-25 11:38 AM


Oh, I forgot to congratulate you on your 4000th post.......



"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-25-2003 11:44 AM).]

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6 posted 2003-01-25 03:33 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Yay!!! Congratulations on 4,000 wonderful posts, sweet friend, you are wise beyond your years and I believe only in destiny and soul can you jaywalk without being restrained! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-01-26 11:31 PM


Hi Kaile,

I so liked the strength of words used in this write, enjoyed, and also congrats on 4000.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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8 posted 2003-01-27 04:55 AM


congrats on your 4000th! That's quite an accomplishment!
scorpio
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9 posted 2003-01-27 09:31 AM


Great write for your 4oooth!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2003-01-27 09:52 AM


Congratulations kaile !! Great job!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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