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Angel Mine
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Angel Mine |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the dusk of the day, as my mind clears away Pretty chimes fill the air, whispers breeze through my hair Looking out to the sky, with my heart tuned up high There to see me so well, dazzled mute in the spell Sent to watch over me, in a kind revelry Taken harp, taken tears, taken all of these years In the falling of night, as the moon shines it’s light Favors flow to my eyes, an unending surprise Carried out for my best, every moment so blessed There to see me so well, all confusion dispel Sent to watch over me, in a kind revelry Taken harp, taken tears, taken all of the years In the midnight soft tone, as my future is shone Paper chase, handcraft lace, filling softly with grace Bending down to my knees, for the gifts such as these There to see me so well, truthful coming to tell Sent to watch over me, in a kind revelry Taken harp, taken tears, taken all of these years In succumb to lie down, in the sea to be drown Pipers lilt in sweet voice, taking over by choice Sleep to be a best friend, comfort brought to the end There to see me so well, peacefully chimes the bell Sent to watch over me, and forever to be Taken harp, taken tears, angel mine always hears Copyright Kkh 12/18/02 |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is so utterly touching, it put tears in my eyes. The rhythm is still going on in my head as I type this. Awesome! Thank you for sharing your fine poetry with us. Warmest regards Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
To be one who has this gift...a treasure.. to be one who gives...also a treasure... Beautiful words...very beautiful words... You have a place where one resides Where one stands beside and never hides. Where one comforts and takes your hand. Always there, wherever you stand. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
THIS is pure poetry!! Exquisite!! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice passage of life here..a grammatical note though..you might like to adjust the drown to drowned..think that would sound so much better too, just a suggestion  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we all have those angels, I think. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo lovely, sweet friend, and may your angel always bring you comfort and security and joy always! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I think we've all been touched by an angel here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Comforting thoughts expressed here, Kathleen...beautiful images too.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, thank you for sharing this wonderful poetry with us. What a gift you have shared with us... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - what can I say except stunning, and exceptional... BC |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is just so outstanding and exquisite. Your poems are always stunning. Hugs, Marti Let our love circle the world and |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is simply beautiful. I love it. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
meh. i wouldnt go as far as stunning, but i did enjoyed it. the rhyming served as its backbone i think--kept me wanting more. lept my attention, and that deserves commending--especially with long poems. still, cool write. -chris. |
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