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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-12-18 07:54 PM

“A SMALL WHITE CLOUD”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I was in a rowboat
once, floating down
a lazy
river on a sunlit day with
a soft breeze
teasing my
face…

As my eyes gazed
into the sky
a small white
cloud danced overhead…

It reminded me when we
first met and
you held me
close as we embraced…

We
glided across
the dance floor
and I melted into you...
~~~~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-12-18 08:08 PM

now Bill... this should melt a few hearts.. nicely romantic... and well presented. I enjoyed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-12-18 08:18 PM

Well, Bill, you know that I love it...being the "hopeless romantic" that I am...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-12-18 08:53 PM

You've got to like a guy
that likes to dance...

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2002-12-18 09:04 PM

and, keep his head in the clouds.....
like the true romantic, he is.

liked this,

warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Laney
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 85
Illinois

5 posted 2002-12-18 09:10 PM

Loved the imagery in this poem. I myself am a hopeless romantic! I loved this poem!! Very good write!

Merry Christmas!!
--Alana

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2002-12-18 10:02 PM

sounds like a dreamy day on the bay, as the clouds float by....nice dream on this cold winter night over here, thanks for the summer
heat

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2002-12-18 11:17 PM

awww this was great!

But you know, your just gonna have to many gals lined at your porch every morning if you keep this up...

But oh please do! I loved it!

Always, GG

- And so it was that time stood still -

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-12-18 11:23 PM

MMMMMMM Bill...may I have the next dance?

Lovely lovely write!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2002-12-18 11:35 PM

Ahhh, the man with music in his step...merely echoes from the heart.
Nice Write Bill. TD

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-12-19 12:19 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yay, I felt like I was drifting on the clouds reading this one and imagined sailing with my Joanna! (big hugggssssss) May love always waltz with you this gracefully, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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11 posted 2002-12-19 01:48 AM

nice comparison, great write!

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