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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-18 07:28 PM

i promised you,
i wouldnt get so attached,
or be a weepy girl when you left last time,
not wonder why the phone is even there,
not see you in every sunset,
not want to scream your name
in the middle of the night
not want to die in your arms,
i promised , i promised
id just let this be,
our every other full moon fantasy,
no ties,no expectations,no promises,
but lately, hon
im feeling like a fly by night romp,
and
id like to smack your face right now...........

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-12-18 07:56 PM

inkedgoddess - potent write I read in your words...

BC

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-12-18 08:08 PM

potent and conflicted feeling shown... often it is not as simple as we would like..and detachment is not always an easy thing to maintain...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-18 08:21 PM

inkedgoddess, I liked this. You told it exactly like it is......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2002-12-18 09:58 PM

THANKS,im also dangerous with a pot of spaghetti...
cpt....yes, this whole detachment thing, is easy to read about by the zen masters of zillions of years ago, but down here on earth, its kind of hard to detach when you love, as far as the saying "whenyou love someone, set them free".i think thats crap..
im not saying lock them up, but why would you want something to leave that you love, doesnt make sense........gotta be a blend

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-19 02:30 AM

well, I can relate, and I don't like to admit that, but yes, I've had my share of those.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

6 posted 2002-12-19 04:45 AM

funny how we make those promises with all the best intentions..and then, there's that heart again!!--always enjoy your honest, "in-your-face" writes!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2002-12-19 07:05 AM

inkgoddess,
I can' see where you're coming from and I can relate but it made for such good reading.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

8 posted 2002-12-19 07:41 AM

smiling, I especially liked the I want to smack your face part....hehe~! If only we could zen-zap and react as we wish we would and not as we do, or something like that. Our emotions are not that easy to dictate...anyway I know mine aren't *S* Enjoyed~MUCHO~!

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