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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-01-20 11:31 PM


You go outside
The fog is like pea soup
I can't see
My hand in front of my face

Driving isn't good
To see the people in front
The lights are turned on
But sometimes that doesn't even work

The fog has set in
In time
It will disappear

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2003-01-20 11:36 PM


Fog is like steam, a fusion of fire and water - you and me Julie. And it's also a cloud that decided to fly low. LOL

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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2 posted 2003-01-21 12:00 PM




(sigh) Many mornings it can always be densely foggy here, as soon as the dawns light comes in then it all clears up suddenly! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderfully descriptive, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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