Foot of the Lake (Fond Du Lac)

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Open Poetry #24

Foot of the Lake (Fond Du Lac)

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26

Posts 267
Missouri,USA

0 posted 2003-01-19 01:01 AM

Foot of the Lake (Fond Du Lac)

Little did I know
that along with my heart,
my desire would also be left...in Wisconsin

Saw a couple walking hand in hand tonight
The moon was full
As the memory of us came stealing
seemed to me that they too,
were feeling what once was you...and I

Outback of Jim and Linda's
my mind stepped back in time
closed my eyes and remembered
our lips kiss,
while the "Foot of The Lake" winds blew gentle,
the moment embellished the instant
as I looked into your eyes

Stars larked, hearts danced,
northern lights tuned to us and our romance,
hearts entwined in joy and delight
close my eyes and I remember the taste
of the kiss under the moon and the stars
that enchanted night

At the Fond Du Lac

Copyright © 2001 Dennis Hicks
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-19 04:37 AM

remembering...*sigh*

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 2003-01-19 05:29 AM

You know, this isn't my usual fare, but I have to say I really really liked your poem...

you have a nice way of creating a scene without over-indulging in imagery...

well done

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