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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2003-01-15 07:45 PM

my island is warm
but it's raining in my heart
rain rain go away
come again some other day
no never never never

~tanka~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2003-01-15 08:43 PM

So sad.

[This message has been edited by Denise (01-15-2003 08:44 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-01-15 08:46 PM

FEDEXING a feelings Umbrella to ya....
Asking Sunshine to make a trip to the
Pacific...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-01-15 10:23 PM

the heart of the ocean welcomes all tears that have fallen along the rain,

like the rain theme

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-01-15 11:19 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) I wouldn't actually mind a flash flood right now, as it is drier than hell here with the worst drought in Colorado history! (sad sigh) Just the same my heart is as ugly as the Sphinx without its nose, I send angel hugs out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-01-16 11:33 PM

Very nice...love the rain...as long as I don't have to work in it...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-01-16 11:36 PM

Yanno Cher...I'm just going to have to visit your warm island....
rain and all.

Good write....tanka, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (01-16-2003 11:37 PM).]

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

7 posted 2003-01-17 12:07 PM

short and sweet. i think the punch comes
in the last line, and really-- you could
write endless amounts of lines describing
rain and whatnot, have that last line and
still have it out to be a good poem.

cool.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-01-17 04:36 AM

yes! beautiful!

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

9 posted 2003-01-17 05:16 AM

that was sad, but it being so short somehow made it worse, now my chest is aching.

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

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