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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-01-13 05:08 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

Kiss me softly on the lips
And whisper words of love so pure
You now have me at your mercy
For this love there is no cure

It flows throughout my veins
As it fills my inner being
Before you claimed my heart
There was no love that I was seeing

Let's savour love's sweet nectar
A blend of passion so divine
We're consumed by love completely
As you move your lips to mine

We'll give in to our desires
As our spirits are set free
And as our two hearts beat as one
You'll become a part of me


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-01-13 05:20 PM


Beautiful poem Sue,  and your continued use
of graphics enhances very well..

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-13 09:49 PM


Hello, Sue
This is a beautiful poem, as is all your poetry.....Thanks for sharing with us....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

angelfriend
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3 posted 2003-01-13 10:36 PM


I love the poem and the picture. I can relate to them both. Romance is the best.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-14 01:28 AM


wouldn't that be nice? *sigh*
enchantingvamp
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5 posted 2003-01-14 04:59 PM


I really enjoyed this piece, gave me warm fuzzy feelings....smiles

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-01-14 08:28 PM


Suetang - a'hhhh my friend, there is no cure, I find it amazing...

BC

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7 posted 2003-01-14 10:12 PM




(sigh) Oh Sue, this is lovely, sweet friend, I wish for love to always consume your heart as you are so deserving of such treasure! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2003-01-15 08:10 PM


Ah Sue, no one writes love poems any better than you. The picture is stunning!

Hugs dear friend, Marti

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