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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-01-12 03:54 PM



I wish I’d never said a word
I wish I could disappear
I’ve fallen into insignificance
And now I’d rather be left alone down here

My strength will not return in today’s light
But one day I will come back and I will fight
To my death
To my final breath
I won’t give hurt a chance
I will fight a heroic battle
And win my freedom

But for now I surrender
Give me your best shot
You made me give up
You tore me apart
And after a while I’ll be stronger again
And then you will have lost the fight

I don’t want to fight now
I just want to sleep
I don’t want to  speak now
I just want to sleep

Maybe that way
I can fall into a dream
That will make reality seem less hurtful
And I won’t have to fight to stay alive.

small insignificant useless me

© Copyright 2003 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
bluRaven
Junior Member
since 2003-01-08
Posts 18
Richmond, VA
1 posted 2003-01-12 05:35 PM


very powerful piece, i can definitely feel your hurt, and it almost reflects how i feel sometimes too.
keep living my friend
luvs!!~~

"~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2003-01-12 06:49 PM


Sleep helps. It gives you strength to get up again. Take your time and get strong and then go out there and tear 'em up!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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