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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-01-12 09:32 AM




the tree
remains fixed
in the ground,
its reach
as limitless
as the open sky
that embraces it,
both past and present
converging,
into this reality
of now



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regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-12 09:46 AM




Inkedgoddess,

I like this, the hope, in growth, yet the sum total of all we are in past and present.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-01-12 09:48 AM


Oh this is wonderful!
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Nan
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3 posted 2003-01-12 09:52 AM


Firmly rooted - yet timeless indeed...
scorpio
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4 posted 2003-01-12 10:00 AM


Very thought provoking, inkedgoddess...well rooted yet free to reach new heights...well done..

believe in what your heart feels...

Magnus
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5 posted 2003-01-12 10:01 AM


Though it grows, and can reach the heavens,
it still stays where it is..  Very interesting write...thought provoking..

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-01-12 11:14 AM


inkedgoddess, this is interesting. I enjoyed the way it made me think....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-01-12 05:38 PM


I like this style a little different, a little something...faith,hope?

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ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2003-01-12 06:27 PM


Stated with elegance my friend.  Beautiful images...and all good thoughts. TD
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-01-12 06:50 PM


Faith, hope yes,

Michele Faith Mi.....

that really is my middle name

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10 posted 2003-01-12 07:15 PM




(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, may the foundation grow deep beneath the soil in each of us and may the nutrients of time converge together in unity! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2003-01-12 07:43 PM


liked it
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