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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-12-17 10:20 PM


This is re-posted from last December when we first wrote it. We want to post this as an annual tradition for our children and Christmas! God Bless You All!

Blue: Bill Charles
Purple: Noah



“HEAVENLY STAR”
by Noah Eaton & Bill Charles

~~~~
Look upon the star crowning our tree
What is it that you see?
In the blink of an eye under His golden manger
Where Mary cradles our loving Saviour


A star shines down, with its brightness
My eyes see, as they gaze
Into the heavens, and into His place
A babe in swaddling clothes, to amaze


I see eyes that shine with light
A boy with a tender warm face
He talks to angels through the night
Comforting His holiness with billows of grace


Eyes of radiance, guiding in the night
A male child, to smile with His grace
Soft words spoken, to the halo above
Bathed with her glow, at His birthplace


I see meadows of hands laid before His presence
Murmuring in mirth and praise
Stars, tears, and frankincense
The greatest love begins to raise


Colors of many hands, to worship one
many gifts to give, to our king
all that you have spoken of
a love of enlightenment, absolving


Yes, I see His love when I glance at this star
In His unconditional love we are feathered
This blessing that shall never mar
Protecting us from every storm we’ve weathered


I see a love also Noah, from this heavenly star
Unconditional, as you have written
And a blessing, to be for always
Knowing, He will never abandon…

~~~~




"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-17-2002 10:23 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-12-17 10:25 PM


Very, very impressive and touching Noah and BC. I enjoyed reading this so much.

Hugs and Christmas blessings to you both...Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

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2 posted 2002-12-17 10:40 PM


Noah & Bill - this is just lovely. A wonderful Christmas tradition. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2002-12-17 10:49 PM


Please do! Post this every Christmas and I will read it every time!---and it will be a blessed event of a blessed event! Wonderful collaboration!

~ group hug
Linda

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4 posted 2002-12-17 10:57 PM


Bill and Noah,

This is very, very special. Enjoyed every line and each flowed so smoothly into the next. Excellent.

Hugs and warm regards to you both

Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-12-17 11:19 PM


Ah Noah and BC...this is wonderful!!
Much enjoyed and yes make it a tradition!
~Hugs to you both~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

the_loner_23
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6 posted 2002-12-17 11:34 PM


I really enjoyed this one Noah.

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2002-12-17 11:44 PM


Now I can say I've witnessed the tradition!  
Kudos to you two for coming together like you have.  It is beautiful.

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8 posted 2002-12-18 01:03 AM


Noah and Bill, this is so beautiful. It's special, too, written by two very special people.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2002-12-18 01:18 AM


just a fien peice of work, by two of our most passionate! I love it! A tradition it should be!

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (12-18-2002 01:18 AM).]

vandana
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10 posted 2002-12-18 11:00 AM


lovely read merry christmas!!!!!!!
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2002-12-18 11:07 AM


Noah and Bill,
Well done enjoyed the read.

Corinne
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12 posted 2002-12-18 06:12 PM


Wonderful work, you two!

Cor

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13 posted 2002-12-18 08:10 PM


Noah - This is just touching, even if we wrote it. Just touching...

BC

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