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GG
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0 posted 2003-01-11 05:06 PM



Hold my hand
So I don’t fall.

When I lean,
I want to feel Your hands
On my shoulder;
Keeping me steady.

I don’t want to fall again.
I know I will..
In time.

And You,
Can pick me up again.

But please,
Just let me feel
Your secure hands
Against mine.

Then I know
I’m alive.

Then I know
Its real.

Then, I
Can keep my faith
Steady, stronger,
When I feel Your hand.

Please,
Let me feel Your hand
In mine.

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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1 posted 2003-01-11 05:07 PM



Unconditional faith...
very tenuous...
fragile...

necessary.

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2 posted 2003-01-11 05:51 PM


Lovely prayer, GG!
GG
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3 posted 2003-01-12 03:54 AM


Thanks for the replies, and for reading.
prayers are the greatest.. much more soothing than a ramble of convicting nonsense and loss of understanding.
Though that comes too (often).


Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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4 posted 2003-01-12 06:57 PM


blind faith in love, how sweet, how far away right now for some
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5 posted 2003-01-12 08:06 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious and I hope you get what you deserve and true love comes to sweep you off your feet! (sigh) This is a true gem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

GG
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6 posted 2003-01-12 09:57 PM


thanks for the replies..
as a prayer lets just say, I don't want what I deserve a sinner, I deserve torture, punishment and wrath.
But the grace upon me is overflowing and I'm thankful because I'm not getting what I deserve.

I just don't like falling so hard!

Thanks again
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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