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Heart's Skip A Beat
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Heart's Skip A Beat |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Love makes our hearts skip a beat all we can do is sigh We love each other more and more as each day passes by You make me feel as though I'm once again a giggly teen Such fun we always have with seriousness in between Some folks say it'll never work this age-difference between us You say "Age is just a number, so why all the fuss?" One thing I'm thinking of about all their discussion Would it make any difference if they'd notice our devotion Although sometimes you and I don't understand us two We still know the most important thing is this LOVE you feel for me and I feel for you SUCH HAPPINESS, WE FEEL [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-11-2003 10:12 PM).] |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Love and age are two different things... if both of you love each other, your love can work out  nice writing The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kelly, that's true, and we've found that out. We've known each other for over five years and have been "in love" for over four.......Age never bothers him, and sometimes doesn't me. All that bothers me is what other people think, sometimes... Thanks for reading and replying...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Just think of it this way....it balances out two personalities...can be very joyful and create many memories.. Best to you both Barry |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Barry. You're sweet...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
if age was the difference between being loved or appreciated, all classics would be read only by the elderly. hehehe Ah, but the seasoning of wisdom allows for better chance of sucess. All my best, G-G! Jeff |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jeff, even though I'm older, he's had a lot more experience in life than I have.....probably more than anyone, any age should have had, actually. So, I kind of think he has more wisdom than I have, in lots of ways. Anyway, I do think that we must have a happy medium where our minds, wisdom, and personalities meet. Sometimes "we" together amaze ourselves. We compliment each other, I guess.... Whatever it is, is absolutely awesome and wonderful..... something like neither of us has ever experienced before..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes what you write makes me believe in love...can't really take much of that kind of writing for some reason, but reading you is good for me. |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
Great poem Ethel! I am a sucker for love poems myself. Most of mine are on that topic. I agree with what everyone has said, and will add that I think the soul is ageless, so if your two souls have found love what does age matter? It matters more that the love is true and you can find happiness with each other. Good luck! Marjorie "The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dixie, thank you for your reply. I consider your comments a compliment. I feel the way you said in your "critique box"....... "I write from the heart. Please be gentle". I do to, Dixie, and it makes me feel good to know that something I write might help someone else believe in whatever I'm writing about. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Marjorie, we agree with you, totally.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ethel~ Enjoyed. True love knows no age boundries, I often think that love makes the heart and body feel younger and full of wanting more out of life. Sort of like Love is our fountain of youth that so many have searched for over the years...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I think love is the most important thing. I wish the best for you. |
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bluRaven Junior Member
since 2003-01-08
Posts 18Richmond, VA |
Sometimes love is one of those things that is underminded by too many standards. Love holds not standards. Lovely writing...! ~muaahh~~ "~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, this made me cry because I know how special love can feel now yet I have it no more, and Joanna once really did love me and then she goes calling me a liar and saying she would never be stupid to have a long distance boyfriend and that I am three years younger than her. But then I am only 1 1/2 years younger than her, and secondly, age means nothing, besides she used to call me her future hubby! (sad sigh) Sorry I'm going off again, I wish for this special love to awlays shine in you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Paul, that's a wonderful thought...about Love being the "Fountain Of Youth". You know, everybody says I'm looking younger, instead of older. Maybe this is why? HeeHee!! Thanks...:squeze: "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Sue  I also think love is the most important thing in a relationship. Thanks....... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
bluRaven, I think you're right. If others would leave the couple who are "in love" alone, more would stay together. Don't you think? "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, are you glad that you "have known" this love for Joanna, than never to have known it at all? I was just wondering, because that's what's always said....... "Better to have known love and lost, than never to have known"... Maybe this is so after a person has healed, but what about while they are healing? "Love makes the world go around" |
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