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angelfriend
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0 posted 2003-01-11 02:35 AM


Introducing myself to this wonderful forum that I have discovered. I thought this would be a good one to share with all of you. Thanks for listening ....


Share With Me

Please share with me,
Share all of you;
Don't hold back,
Don't be afraid.

I want to reach inside,
To see your soul,
To hold it close,
Never letting go.

You don't have to be perfect,
Only showing your best side;
I think you are wonderful,
Even what you try to hide.

Don't think I can't sense
All that you are,
All that you feel,
All that you protect.

So don't keep it hidden.
You are safe with me.
I care for you deeply,
All that is seen and unseen.

I want to share your joy,
Your burdens and fears,
Your worries and doubts,
Your passion and tears.

We can share it all.
Just open your door.
My soul is waiting for you,
It is yours to explore.

MAA  3/25/02


© Copyright 2003 Marjorie August - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-11 03:17 AM


to Passions Angelfriend - what a lovely entrance poem and I am sure not only will you like the community here, but judging from your first poem we are going to really enjoy your work.

Check your mail for a little surprise!

~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~
        

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2 posted 2003-01-11 04:21 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Marjorie, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I hope your heart is always touched by this special gift, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Marjorie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marjorie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-01-11 07:10 AM



It's a joy to be discovered,
as well as a joy to Welcome you to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-01-11 08:59 AM



Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

A Tone of Voice
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5 posted 2003-01-11 09:16 AM


without sharing our lives would be barren and empty.....nicely done angelfriend~!!  *S*

~Atov

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6 posted 2003-01-11 09:29 AM


angelfriend
Welcome and you touched me.

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7 posted 2003-01-11 09:52 AM


angelfriend -

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-01-11 09:54 AM



       

WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS  IN  POETRY


MARJORIE
This is a very good entrance you have made here. And I saw
from the number of posts you already have, that you been
replying to others people's poetry......and probably read
a lot before you even joined. That's what I did, too. Isn't
this a wonderful place to discover? Apparently
you love poetry or you wouldn't have discovered
this beautiful place. This "family of friends" here
at PIP are some of the greatest people you will ever meet.
I've only been here for a few months, but I love it....

I will be looking forward to reading more of your poetry,
and learning more about you. We do have a way of
telling of ourselves in our words, don't we?





~Ethel~   aka  garysgirl

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9 posted 2003-01-11 09:56 AM


Yes, it is a nice one to share...and welcome
to a place where listening is a nice feel.


angelfriend
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10 posted 2003-01-11 12:35 PM


     

Thank you all SO MUCH. Wow! I knew this forum was terrific but now it is confirmed. What a wonderful warm welcome you have all extended to me. I look forward to sharing more with you.

Marjorie

"The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson

[This message has been edited by angelfriend (01-11-2003 12:37 PM).]

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-01-11 01:05 PM


Wow! Well, I don't have any fancy little animations but I would like to say WELCOME to you! Thanks for being here and sharing!
Sandpiper
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12 posted 2003-01-12 04:46 AM


Welcome! enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

enchantingvamp
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13 posted 2003-01-12 05:31 AM


Welcome over!  This was a great read, gave me warm fuzzy feelings, thanx!
Midnitesun
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14 posted 2003-01-12 12:01 PM


Marjorie, welcome to Passions. Your entrance is heartwarming. Enjoy your moments in time with your new friends here.
angelfriend
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since 2003-01-11
Posts 52
Michigan USA
15 posted 2003-01-12 01:39 PM


Thanks all.

passingshadows don't worry - I don't know how to do the fancier stuff yet either. maybe we can get a lesson.

Sandpiper - glad you enjoyed it.

enchantingvamp - Glad you got a warm fuzzy. That was the intent.

Midnitesun - Thanks. I already am enjoying myself immensely. You are all wonderful.

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