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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-12-17 08:54 PM


“SOMEHOW YOU KNOW”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I can’t express deepness of me,
I don’t says things correctly,
yet somehow you know I do,
somehow you know I love you…

Words come out but don’t flow,
words I say are not of Romeo,
yet somehow you know I do,
somehow you know I love you…

You give to me everything,
you give me all of you willing,
and you know that I do,
you know that I love you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-12-17 08:58 PM


Bill,
I'm sure she knows, a beautiful write.

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-12-17 09:11 PM


Bill darling heart, you know there is within your words such beauty, and you shade it so delicately and deepen the connection to the heart so skilfully. Wonderful writing darling heart, absolutely wonderful, you know I utterly utterly love this. Thank you for this amazing poem I love it utterly utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-17 09:22 PM


I beg to differ! Your poetic and loving words are  definitely in the same league as those uttered by Romeo.

~ With a poem like this, how could she not know how much she is loved....

EA

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2002-12-17 09:27 PM




send her your poetry, what you may not say,
will whisper it to her heart

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-17 09:45 PM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, sometimes the eyes and the smile just say it all and that thought makes me smile too! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-12-17 10:24 PM


YES, somehow they always seem to know, don't
they?  Nice words BC...and so very true..

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-12-17 11:21 PM


Oh so romantic Bill...
and when she reads your words..
I'm sure she knows.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Martie
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8 posted 2002-12-17 11:25 PM


Bill

This is so sincerly written, its beauty is the heart.  

Salty
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9 posted 2002-12-17 11:29 PM


I'm thinking you probably do have a way with your words....but if you don't just give her this poem.  It was beautiful


~Salty

vandana
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10 posted 2002-12-18 12:02 PM


very nice
gemjop
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11 posted 2002-12-18 04:58 PM


ahhhhh she knows. beautiful!
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

christian
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12 posted 2002-12-18 05:31 PM



mr. bill, sir.

maybe it's the fact that i'm one of those
thriftstore wearing faded jean teenagers
who despise the stale lyrics of an nsync
pop love song, i dunno--but this is too
mushy.

i'm sure she'll love it.

blah.

garysgirl
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13 posted 2002-12-18 05:41 PM


Well, Bill,  ANY  woman would love it....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Siofra
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14 posted 2002-12-19 12:46 PM


We always know.
A very loving write, Sir.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Charisma
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15 posted 2002-12-20 06:56 PM


Beautiful, beautiful penned!!

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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16 posted 2002-12-20 07:36 PM


you're among good company...most men are like that...and have women who just know.
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