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Open Poetry #24
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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
0 posted 2003-01-09 11:12 PM

Locked in
spiral strands
staircases leading
ever downward
Polluting
the red river
Though blood
may be thicker
At least the
wine gives
a sense
of pleasure
from time
to time
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-01-09 11:15 PM

yes, ill drink to that, make it red, better for the heart
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-01-10 02:36 AM

agreed!
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-01-10 03:12 AM

Inked preferably I'd drink a F***-Me Up (cognac,brandy,whiskey and rum) but it didn't seem to fit. but wine is a more poetic drink anyway is it not

thanks dixie always nice to see you stop by
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-01-10 06:42 AM

afraid to say the f word?
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