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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-01-09 09:11 PM


Previously having not total
communication
of heart
both being badly bruised from
others words,
actions
Maybe hurt was intended,
maybe not

Because of hurtful past
lives,  we
both being more careful,
sensitive
of what we might say
of what we
might
do

Trying to think we, before
doing anything
before we speak
words
Having communication as never
before
bringing happy
results

Which are,
    we are keeping  
         our passionate
               feelings
                   stirring





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1 posted 2003-01-09 09:17 PM


Communication is a great thing. My fiance and I are very open with each other and it works out so much better that way

another lovely write

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2 posted 2003-01-09 09:20 PM


enjoyed
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-09 09:21 PM


Thank you, Heather.....
Having open communication is essential to keep a
relationship alive, I think....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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4 posted 2003-01-09 09:22 PM


Thank you, Vandana. I'm glad you enjoyed it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-01-09 10:44 PM


gently thought-provoking write ethel...

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2003-01-09 10:50 PM


always keep stirring...it keeps things from  getting stale.  *S*
~Salty

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7 posted 2003-01-09 10:54 PM


Scorpio, thanks for reading and for replying.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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8 posted 2003-01-09 10:55 PM


HeeHee...
Salty girl.......
It sure does.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-01-09 10:58 PM


so much work sometimes, its not easy to be in a real relationship - i think that is why a lot of people just run from it, but if you both are open to talking, it's half the battle, good luck anyhow
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10 posted 2003-01-09 11:44 PM


inkedgoddess,
I think that's one thing (probably the only good one, really) about long-distance relationships...you  HAVE to talk more......through phone calls and letters. That is, if there's any communication between the times together.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-01-10 12:18 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Ethel, that is how I want to love my girl when I find her, because I have suffered as a little boy and abused hysically and emotionally and now I know how it feels for everyone else and I want to make my girl feel special and when I grow up when the time is right years from now, I want to have a child or two and want them to feel loved and always be there for him and live the happiest lives they can! (big hugggssssssss) I really thought Joanna shared a common understanding of the pain as she too has been hurt before, but uess we just weren't the same in understanding, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2003-01-10 01:56 AM


That's right Ethel, a kind gesture is such a simple act, our actions speak as loudly as our words that bring both happiness and pain.

Love your sweet heart gal~  

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13 posted 2003-01-10 02:12 AM


another part, as passionate as the others...very nice...almost makes me believe
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14 posted 2003-01-10 08:58 AM


Noah, good to see you, friend. I hope you're feeling
somewhat better? Time helps heal, doesn't it?
Thank you for reading and replying to me...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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15 posted 2003-01-10 09:00 AM


Yes, Lori,
Actions, as well as words can bring pain.
I try to not hurt with either, though I certainly
have a lots of times.
Thank you for reading.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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16 posted 2003-01-10 09:02 AM


Dixie,
I really hope that you will meet someone who will
"make a believer" of love out of you. You are such a sweet,
loving person..

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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