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Kissing You in the Shower/ Showering you with Kisses
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Kissing You in the Shower/ Showering you with Kisses |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia 
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I'm singing at the top of my lungs, as I cover my body with soap; I pause to pull back the curtain to sustain that little hope... That dream I had stil haunts me, of you walking in the door, and handing me my towel, as we kiss, then kiss some more. My cheeks flush with embarrassed heat, as evil thoughts make me start to quiver, and despite the hot water and all the steam my body starts to shiver. I rest my head against the cool tiles and tell myself I've lost my brain, "You're crazy Shireen, you're completely nuts, you've finally gone insane." Then I wash my hair with facewash, and cover my face with the shampoo: The final sign I've lost my sense, and all because of you! I laugh at my stupidity, at the whole ridiculous scene, and yet I take that second out to peek around the shower screen. Then I rinse the facewash out of my hair and cover wash it again with the shampoo, I pray there's nothing in the facewash that'll make my hair turn blue. Then I wash the shampoo off my face taking extreme care; 'cos the last thing I want is the shampoo to make my face get covered with hair. Then I splash the water on myself, and watch the soap get chased away, I dry myself, put on my clothes, and continue to think about you all day. 24/03/99 The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. [This message has been edited by Rainbowdust (01-08-2003 09:49 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Neither embarrassed nor evil thoughts are these, In truth such flattery should bring men to their knees. Enjoyed (by the way what were you singing?) |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
It probably would have been "Angel of Mine" which was my favourite song at the time... pity I can't listen to it anymore because of all the memories it brings up... thanks for your reply mate.  The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a really cute poem. I liked it all the way through.... Thanks for sharing with us...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks for the smile, brightened a dreary day. raph |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Shireen, Well now...I could use a cold shower. This is an adorable poem and so well written. I think it's a keeper. I loved this, can you tell? If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is terrific and has me smiling from ear to ear...the memories of mine coming back in a flash.....such fun! Though I have to admit never shampooed with face wash.... Enjoyed, hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rainbowdust - my oh my, this is a very nice shower and write... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very cute, got a grin from me on this write. Thank You... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write...loved the humor in it |
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MattGarcia Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 19Texas, USA |
nice, i like this poem because it reminds me of my girlfriend, in a strange way. |
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