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Charisma
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0 posted 2003-01-08 04:48 PM






King Winter entrances
snowfight changes, I've hit y'all
SPLASH, with my snowball



Theresia


(this was my first haiku ever, and I couldn't resist to repost this one. yep just because its Wintertime)



[This message has been edited by Charisma (01-08-2003 04:54 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-01-08 05:01 PM


Charisma, this is so cute. I love it...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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2 posted 2003-01-09 03:54 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I just love your new picture too, it is so cute as I also love flowers so much! (big hugggsssssss) Yay, got you, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Shakira

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3 posted 2003-01-09 03:59 AM


cute
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4 posted 2003-01-09 05:01 AM


Ouch!
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5 posted 2003-01-09 08:28 AM


Charisma..
with a haiku
allowing one to feel
sensation
is the reward..
cool one ms..
Dark

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6 posted 2003-01-09 08:50 AM


You need to write Haiku's often. Very cute!

Deb

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7 posted 2003-01-09 08:57 AM


Charisma
Enjoyed your picture and your write.

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8 posted 2003-01-09 09:00 AM


This made me smile.
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9 posted 2003-01-09 09:21 AM


cute senyru! hehehehe

great to see you here

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I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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10 posted 2003-01-09 09:39 AM


enjoyed
Charisma
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11 posted 2003-01-10 03:16 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies
they are highly appreciated by me.



Charisma

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12 posted 2003-01-10 04:50 PM


May we return fire???

believe in what your heart feels...

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13 posted 2003-01-10 05:01 PM


hmmm how rude...now my screen is all covered in snow...



Charisma
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14 posted 2003-01-10 07:49 PM


scorpio: fire? that would melt the fun

Ron: rude.....oh no...not rude at all, turned it only in a snowy good screen

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15 posted 2003-01-10 08:17 PM


Charisma - and it went splat upside me head, ouch!!!!

BC

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16 posted 2003-01-10 08:32 PM


Charisma~ Enjoyed. Not much snow down south, so could you send some to me, I love a good snow fight...Paul

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17 posted 2003-01-10 08:45 PM


girlfriend now take that,
here i threw your snowball back,
throw me a daffodil

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