navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » My Heart Aches From The Missing
Open Poetry #24
Post A Reply Post New Topic My Heart Aches From The Missing Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-01-07 02:37 AM


My heart aches from the
missing of you
Hurt so real,  what to do
I know not
Phone calls never are
long enough
Though every single
day we talk
Letters every day,  but can't
say all we want
Your touch,  I miss it so very
very much
Your kiss,  soft sweet
lips touching
Your hands,  so loving and
tender caressings
Your eyes,  such love I see in
their soft brown
Your scent,  the masculine cologne,
the smell of you
The longing,  the desire,  the
want of you

Oh,  my Love,  this ache of,
of my heart


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-07-2003 02:39 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

1 posted 2003-01-07 03:02 AM


"Ain't nothing like the real thing", Bleeding words of longing these.
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2003-01-07 04:25 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) I can only feel everything about the ache! (wipes tears) I hope unlike me you and your love live happily ever after with faith and honesty in heart, sweet friend, you are so deserving of true love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2003-01-07 06:36 AM


Ethel,
this is achingly real.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-01-07 11:15 AM


Amen, Richard.......
I love "the real thing", too...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Salty
Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
5 posted 2003-01-07 11:18 AM


Sounds like your a little homesick....for your love,  Hopefully you will be uniting soon and your poems will read of that.


Nicely done Ethel


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
6 posted 2003-01-07 11:23 AM


Noah, no-one is more deserving of "true love" than you are......
Because you truly are an


   ~Ethel~

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
7 posted 2003-01-07 11:25 AM


Oh Kethry, it is so real. I miss him so much it hurts........  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
8 posted 2003-01-07 11:27 AM


Yes, Salty (girl),  

I am so "homesick" for him. You're right about that, too...
"Home" is wherever he is. I just wish I could get that
across to my Dad....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-07-2003 11:30 AM).]

regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
9 posted 2003-01-07 11:54 AM





Heart hugs from me to you.....

It has to be difficult, no matter phone calls, letters and e-mail....
and especially when trying to abide by someone else's opinion of what you should do.....

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
10 posted 2003-01-07 12:02 PM


loved it
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2003-01-07 12:43 PM


I remember feeling this way...thanks for the reminding.
quik
Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia
12 posted 2003-01-07 01:44 PM


I feel your emotions in  this piece and thanks for you welcoming comments. its good to be back.
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
13 posted 2003-01-07 01:48 PM


Yes, Pat...it is hard. It looks like I'd quit trying
to please my Dad. I'm just so thankful that Gary is so understanding.
I just hope that he doesn't get tired of waiting .....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
14 posted 2003-01-07 01:50 PM


Vandana, I'm so glad that you like it. Thank you..

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
15 posted 2003-01-07 01:52 PM


Dixie, like I told you in my reply to one
of your poems.....
some memories should never be thown away, or
pushed back in
our minds. They should be in a safe place and cherished.
Those are the memories that keep us going in this life...the good ones.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
16 posted 2003-01-07 01:53 PM


Wow!  I know this feeling...
I do hope all works out okay for you and Gary.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
17 posted 2003-01-07 01:55 PM


Yes, Antonio, those emotions of longing and wanting to
see my Love are almost to much to bear sometimes.
I have to write or something. I'm just so glad that
all of you are here to encourage with your sweet and compassionate words.
Thank you....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
18 posted 2003-01-07 01:59 PM


Nancy Lee, thank you so much for your well-wishes.
I do believe that our strong love and commitment
to each other will overcome all obstacles we may have to endure.
Neither of us have ever had feelings for another human being
as strong as we share for each other...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Sandpiper
Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738
land of flora and fauna
19 posted 2003-01-08 05:33 AM


you express your heart with such deep emotion..'tis wonderful to share something so beautiful in this life--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
20 posted 2003-01-08 11:18 AM


True love shall find its way, Ethel - These are lovely words to pen to your loved one...
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
21 posted 2003-01-08 11:35 AM


Thank you, Sandpiper.
Yes, we do feel very blessed to have found each other,  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
22 posted 2003-01-08 11:41 AM


Nan, thank you for your sweet reply. I appreciate
your words....
(BTW, I've been looking for some more of your poems
Here. You must be busy with your sweet little
Grandbaby.  Why don't you start another "Passions Add-on"?
I'm still not certain what those little Japanese verses
are called, so I don't want to start one. The other
one you started was really fun, though.)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-08-2003 11:47 AM).]

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » My Heart Aches From The Missing

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary