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Bohemianaus
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since 2003-01-05
Posts 69
Australia (South Gippsland)

0 posted 2003-01-07 02:03 AM



On Raymonde's Passing
(A collection of Haiku)



You left us to play;

But, it feels ever so hard

Your going away.



I miss you too much;

Wishing you still here speaking

In my world today!



Hand in hand with God,

At frolic in Heaven's lea

Amid angelic lay.



At rest heart in Heart;

A deserving place to be

In eternal day!



Your longing fulfilled,

At one with Le Bon Dieu,

I rejoice for you.



Host on earth you were,

Hosted in Heaven you are

Lavished in love.



I feel you at peace

And am glad for your delight

In eternity!

[This message has been edited by Bohemianaus (01-07-2003 02:05 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Christopher R Creek - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-01-07 04:39 AM


Good haiku or senyrus or whatever. I can never tell the difference.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-01-07 04:59 AM


wonderful collection! Be proud!
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2003-01-07 02:05 PM




Yes, so talented, you are. I enjoy your work a great deal. Thanks for sharing it with us.


Hugs and warm regards,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-01-07 02:08 PM



...Beautiful!!...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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