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Bend of Sky
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Bend of Sky |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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 Bend of Sky Could I but go to bend of sky see the things that sunrise brings around the corner I would run there bare shouldered dream with wings Could a blooming backwards rose grow from petals on the lawn a breeze would take them to the face and stick them there with dew of dawn A child would know a wisdom song an old man whimsy chase around and ground would hold a crayon’s melt as night moon glows a suntan brown Love would surely stay with hands that promised ever after and trees would lay their branches down for climbing faster laughter Could I but go to bend of sky see the things that sunrise brings around the corner I would run there bare shouldered dream with wings ----- 11-01 with photo by Martie from Maui, 10-02 I'll be away for over a week to be with family that needs some help...and I'll have no computer access...see ya when I get back..I'll miss you all!  |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed this very much. And good luck where you'll be! -Tanya Drangon Mistress ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie yet another fascinating painting in your very beautiful poetic style. Good luck to you and your family who needs the help. ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The images are so exhilarating... Regards to you, Sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Martie, I wish you the best with this family who I know will be deeply touched by your compassion and hospitality, sweet friend, God Bless You and I can't wait to hear how everything went and to read your lovely words again, we all send hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Marti, ..."for climbing faster laughter"... So creative. I love this. I wish for you for this trip, a peace-filled journey. God bless and be with you and yours. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie, you paint images so well, and so clearly. I enjoyed this very much! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fabulous images, hurry back soon. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes - Reach for the sky... It holds many secrets.. Beautiful as always, Martie..  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 We shall keep your place so warm as link we shall, all arm in arm to keep the circle here for you, our poet, Martie, with her view.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful sweet Martie. You take care of things with family. We'll be here with open arms waiting for you.. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie The poem is lovely and have a safe trip. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely phantasy of thought and images have a safe and fruitful trip, hope all will be well for everyone concerned Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marti, as always, I love reading your poetry and seeing your beautiful words painted in my mind's eye........ My prayers and love are with you as you go on your trip. And also with your family and everyone concerned who need your help. You will be greatly missed by all of us here at PIP. Your big family of friends here love you, sweet Marti..... Take care and we'll see you when you get back...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
I adored thislovely creative gem and read it over and then once again HURY BACK! aloha,Cher Poetry is: |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I'll miss you sis love and prayers Dale Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Martie. all the best to you and your family Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (01-08-2003 12:24 AM).] |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"Sweet dreams are made of this"--lovely!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Martie...you always paint so well these vivid pictures of your open heart. Enjoyed this. TD. |
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