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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-01-06 10:49 AM



The telephone silence is all that I hear
besides the melting of snow.
I await the word of three in need
sitting here wanting to know.

No news is good news, sometimes they say
but to me it's empty of feel.
So I sit here waiting in silent of voice,
along with my worried conceal.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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gemjop
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1 posted 2003-01-06 11:25 AM


That feeling swallows you whole. you wrote of it very well. the nagging waiting. i hope that when your news arrives , it is of the good variety. my thoughts are with u.
lots of love, gem xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-01-06 12:13 PM


well I am not in my best of poet modes here...waiting for my Mother's cateract surgery today, a friends removal of a cancerous tumor and kidney, and another friends radiation treatments for brain cancer. I just hope all goes well with each. It makes one grateful for one's health.
Thank you for your thoughts.
hugss
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-06-2003 12:14 PM).]

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