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Tim
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0 posted 2003-01-05 01:40 PM



When grief is raw
and thoughts are numb,
remember this my friend,
no gift's too small
but to the giver,
when with the heart you send.
As pain descends
and sorrows shroud
on one for whom you care,
a word of comfort,
a touch of hand,
to show them that you're there.
When dark clouds gather
in your own life;
your spirits need a lift,
if you've paid heed
to these simple words,
you too, will receive love's gift.

© Copyright 2003 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-01-05 03:11 PM


Tim....a good message, my friend.  :hugs;
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2 posted 2003-01-05 03:13 PM


Tim,

A very wise and truth filled message,
thank you..

Nan
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3 posted 2003-01-05 03:18 PM


These are wise and truthful words, m'friend... Nicely said..
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4 posted 2003-01-05 03:26 PM


Tim, this is so true. I love this poem. It is filled with love and compassion, my friend...  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-01-05 03:27 PM


How very true, for I have received this gift and it was priceless.  Nice reminder.

~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~
        

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6 posted 2003-01-05 03:28 PM


that was a sweet poem with good meaning.

Never be normal!

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