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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-01-04 01:54 PM


The Sun won’t shine, the Moon won’t glow,
The world just wails in anguish,
The clouds blanket with deep shadow,
Hope starts slowly to vanish,
The Sun won’t shine, the Moon won’t glow,
Now comes the Rage of Darkness.

He rescues her, she rescues him,
And both fall to the coming shadow,
There was glad, a remembered when,
Now the fields have gone to fallow,
No planted spring, no harvest Autumn,
Swords have reaped what the fields might grow.

The Sun won’t shine, the Moon won’t glow,
She beg for his knife to sheath;
In the ever night the day won’t know
As all the people lose their belief
There might never be a tomorrow,
And the world will fall in endless grief.

He consumes her, she consumes him,
In passions that turn to sorrow,
They lay in life that might soon end,
Will there be one more tomorrow,
The Rage of Darkness and all things blend,
Nothing is left but shifting shadow.

Gloom

Lyrics for Morbid Mange



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-01-04 02:07 PM


I think you've told my life here
gemjop
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2 posted 2003-01-05 03:59 PM


i'm liking this. a lot. i got lost in it. as if engulfed by the darkness it posessed. very interesting read. thanks Gloom.

lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-01-07 01:30 PM


i really like this, so i'm just gonna send it back to the top, with each read, it says more.  

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2003-01-07 01:34 PM


Thank you, passing shadows,
Wasn’t try to capture a life, just write a song,
Seems so often they happen together.

Thank you, gemjop
Thank you, gemjop,
Pleased you enjoyed it so much
I hope the song get recorded eventually.

Gloom

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