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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-01-03 11:31 PM




The hours with you fall heavy
like anchor,
drowning me with every glance,
that i take.
As clocks hands move mechanically,
thoughtless,
predictable.
I smile as ours interlock,
your soft caressing touch upon mine.
Every tic,
A new sensation.
Every toc,
we've beaten the clock.
We have something,
That it does not.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-01-04 12:42 PM


Gemma, I love this. It is so pretty.......  

It's  a  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-04 03:44 AM


tis beautiful!
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-01-04 01:23 PM


gemjop - a tic, a toc, a warm embrace. Never looked at a clock this way before. Nice write...

BC

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