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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-01-03 03:15 PM


“LEARNED FROM YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If a cloud caressed
a mountain top,
and lay it’s mist down,
it would be the same
as an embrace,
coming from the
warmth of you…

If the sky changed
to tones of blue,
from the grey of
skies that were,
it would be the
same as one look,
from the eyes of you…

If my touch were
gentle with a kiss
deep with passion,
it would be the same
as a cuddling dove
soft, as the
pleasures I learned
from you…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-03 03:19 PM


Oooh Bill, this has got to be one of your best!! It is sooooo romantic and penned with such open honesty. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-01-03 04:33 PM


Oh Bill...now you know I love this more than my sister does!
Wonderful..oh so romantic!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Sunkissed
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3 posted 2003-01-03 05:20 PM


Bill, this is so tender and lovely.

Enjoyed.

Sunkissed.

Nan
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4 posted 2003-01-03 05:38 PM


There he goes again... Romance a la BCI...

Martie
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5 posted 2003-01-03 06:12 PM


Bill....You do know how to turn a phrase towards romance.  Good to see you...Happy New Year!
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-01-03 06:24 PM


Bill,
You romantic devil you, enjoyed.


NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2003-01-03 06:54 PM


Aw geez, haven't seen you in a bit and you pop in here with these unbelievably touching and romantic words.

Phew.....!!!          Hugs, Marti

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-01-03 07:14 PM


thanks for a dose of bill again,
its been a bit, hasnt it?
you go down nice and easy, just like i like it......

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2003-01-03 07:30 PM


Very beautiful...enjoyed the vitality and open sentiment. ThisDiamond
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
10 posted 2003-01-03 11:07 PM


You are indeed a skilled writer
when it comes to the art of love.

Enjoyed the peace and warm feelings BC~

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11 posted 2003-01-03 11:11 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Bill, I know just how youn feel, I learned so much from my Joanna and will never forget her love as she will always be a muse of my heart! (sad sigh) I wish for love to always instruct your heart with smiles, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2003-01-04 03:48 AM


*sigh* wonderful imagery
regards2you
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13 posted 2003-01-04 05:14 AM




Bill,

It takes a good student for a teacher to excell. Smiling here, this is so soft and loving. Enjoyed.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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14 posted 2003-01-04 09:03 AM


What beautiful thoughts, Bill...but you always have beautiful thoughts and I certainly do enjoy reading them. Thank you........  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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15 posted 2003-01-04 11:41 AM


I just found my favorite Bill Charles poem.......
it was here all along.....
very lovely and soft Bill.  
May I make it a ?

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16 posted 2003-01-04 05:05 PM



Darn it.
Here I sit
with eyes of green.

Very nice, Bill...
thank you!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
17 posted 2003-01-04 05:16 PM


enjoyed the comfort of your words, Bill

Always
M

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18 posted 2003-01-04 05:19 PM


Oh Bill this is soooo tender written....enjoyed it very, very much

Charisma

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19 posted 2003-01-04 07:47 PM


enjoyed
Rainbowdust
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20 posted 2003-01-05 05:41 AM


*smiles* Thank you for softening my evening.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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