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EliJah
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 8


0 posted 2004-05-07 11:20 AM


unbeautiful waterfalls embrace my eyes pain
floods caused by love drought sweep my emotions
each step overshadowed by thunderous yet somehow silent rain
seeking confort yet devastated by my alcoholic love potion
my heart takes the pen as i conduct another cliche in verse
torn pages like life, contemplating the pleasantries of a herse
gasping for air as hades waves show no mercy
surrounded by evil down-pour, yet still spiritually thirsty
clear nights and dark days like a life of fantasy
or nightmare, as i awake screaming franticly
ghosts break into light, no room left in evenings black
only hope of reaching heaven is forming this hurt into stacks
don't mention the future, still unrecovered from pain past
floating thru the seas of torment with sail on white mast
may have a pale complexion but my soul is of crude
as 'what ive been told' & my beliefs continue to feud
no corners left to turn, jagged tears pronounce my fate
once turned my back on God, but now on Him i'll meditate

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-05-09 10:12 PM


EliJah -- sometimes our cup has to be emptied before it can be filled.  God, in whatever manner you perceive, does love you.  You are gifted with the use of words and very talented at conveying your feelings through them.  
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