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"Fooled"
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"Fooled" |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
I lay in tears Waiting for your help I cry out to you Desperate for your voice I curse your name Hoping you¡¦ll respond I smile, thinking of you Believing you notice I ask for you to change me To better me, to make me into what I believe is suitable for you You remain without thought Voice Action Feeling Anything I walk away, free from you And you don¡¦t stop me Do you exist? Or are you another False idea? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This poem asks a lot of questions but God exists. He expects us to make the effort ourselves and then he helps. Like any good parent. Joyce |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
My name is theresa powell and i thought your poem was very inspirational and terrific |
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D edgar Grey Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 174Hell...(aka Wisconsin) |
Thanks! #^_^#...I've never posted in the spiritual section of pip before, and since my piece seemed to go against what everybody else believed I was kinda nervous about posting it...but I'm very glad that no one had criticized it. Thank you for the support! I may post more here...not sure though...>; ) "Am assured,receptive,responsive women of substance. My sense of self comes not from other people but from myself? That can't be right." Bridget Jones |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Ah, and that you exist, He truly does live for He lives in each and every one of us, as we are intertwined in His web of infinite grace as brothers and sisters! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, He loves you all and His love never fails, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carson, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DEdgarGrey~ An interesting read ... 'I ask for you to change me To better me, to make me into what I believe is suitable for you' I believe He *gifts* us the faith to believe that WE can change ourselves by following the simple things He asks of us~ I don't believe He 'fools' us ... we only fool ourselves if we can't find our faith~ Hope you will post more of your feelings here~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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