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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Whispering Hawk A clockwork pass bears return to rest A mind adrift falls behind the steering time Grant the day a vision of your wings A sight amiss finds you high upon a sending line Brown feather cross this path of ours Your spirit charms bestow securing things Trace your winding gliding turns Solemn circles fall from atop the sky A sense of common air and brotherhood A touch of wonder floats within the wind Grant the day a vision of your flight A lifting heart finds a place to hold within Brown feather, a sturdy humble essence You bring harvest to repairing light A reminder of his whispering presence Solemn goodness, good feathered friend Timothy Work He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nice work Tim. There is something so magical and mystical about these soaring creatures. Nice to read you. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Timothy: I like the images of your hawk spinning spirals against the sky. I see wild raptors often, here in the country where I live and there is something awe-inspiring about them and the way they master the air currents. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Timothy, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love hawks and all birds and envy how they grace the skies effortlessly! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is majestic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Timothy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Great "natural" feel to this. It has a depth that is historically flavored. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
In reading this I was reminded to let my spirit soar like this creature, made by God's own spoken word! Loved this!  Love, Terri~  |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Thank you all - My wife (whos is Native American) once told me that to see a hawk meant good luck. Ever since I have felt this unexplainable bond with them. Weird? Anyway, I wasn't sure about the form or movement of this poem, I am trying to break out some the molds and crutches I have been using for so long. I hope it works. Thank you all and God Bless. - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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