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X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

0 posted 2003-06-16 07:03 AM

When the sun rises tomorrow
With her lovely golden rays
In exactly identical fashion
As in all of your final days
You won't be here to greet her
In this disgusting place
I pray that you will be gazing
On the Heart-taker's luminous face
I hope that you will be dancing
And seeing soul-lifting sights
I wish for you to be cradled
In the hands of the Father of Lights

I wrote this after my grandfather William died. So it is dedicated to him...

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Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-06-16 10:50 AM

A lovely memory gift to your grandpa. Love, Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2003-06-16 02:43 PM

X Q: I think your poem is lovely and a nice tribute to your grandfather.

Betty Lou Hebert

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-06-16 04:21 PM

Your love shines through these beautiful words of wellwishing to your grandfather.
May his soul soar high, as you wished him.
Love, Margherita

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-06-17 10:01 AM

Nice poem XQ, especially the 1st 4 lines. The light will shine in our final day. Enjoyed.

mysticpoe

LayItDown
Member

since 2003-05-17

Posts 94

5 posted 2003-06-17 01:08 PM

Good job! Touching.

Love,
LayItDown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-06-21 04:20 PM

(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, I know that your grandfather now will always be safe with Him and will always guide you with his love as he will never forget you and alwyas love you and when the time is right you will join him again! (sigh) This is a beautiful dedication, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andreas, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-21-2003 04:20 PM).]

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2003-06-27 09:37 PM

X Q Poet

A warm and touching accolade to your grandpa

Beverly

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

8 posted 2003-06-29 09:22 AM

I'm sure he was glad that you came to terms with his passing. Wonderful tribute.

Melton

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