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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2003-04-17 03:11 PM



One Tear


     A
      tear
         ran from
          God’s eye
         to touch the
         barren ground
       as rapport to you
      and I that His Love
     abundantly abounds
    in its realm of Hope
   and massive scope
   expressed as is
   the ocean



shed as one tear that made it clear the depth of God’s devotion.


-Lighthouse Bob




[This message has been edited by Mysteria (04-20-2003 12:56 AM).]

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WhileIWasGone
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1 posted 2003-04-17 04:31 PM


This is so perfect...one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read.
I'm in awe ...thank you so much for making my day with such beautiful poetry.

G-d Bless You!

Heather

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2 posted 2003-04-17 05:19 PM


Bob:  Really beautiful!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-04-17 07:36 PM


I''m amazed.  Joyce
Seth
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4 posted 2003-04-17 07:38 PM


Wow, I am very impressed. This might make a good book sumbmission.

Seth

SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-04-18 12:30 PM


You never cease to put me into a state of shock with the beauty of your words. Awe-struck and loving it.
Flower
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6 posted 2003-04-19 08:51 PM


Aweome!

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Musicmaker1969
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7 posted 2003-04-19 10:40 PM


Beautiful poem.  Just beautifully expressed!

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Welna
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8 posted 2003-04-20 12:58 PM


What a beautiful poem Bob, and the structure of your presentation is outstanding.  A very happy Easter to you and your family.

     

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-04-20 11:03 AM


This is delicate and powerful in the same time. Wonderful and the shape of the tear, so lovely!
Thank you.
Love, Margherita

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10 posted 2003-04-20 11:17 AM


I really like this, Bob... not only did you manage to fit it into the teardrop shape, but you also gave the verse a very distinct flow that kept it reading smoothly.  Excellent work.

Parasite

God becomes as
we are that we
may be as he
is
~William Blake

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11 posted 2003-04-24 06:34 PM






(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, just seeing the teardrop shape made me want to cry too because you have a golden heart filled with love and I truly believe His teardrops represent the rain that harvests spring! (wipes tears) This is lively, sweet friend, we are all devoted to your words as we are to Him, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

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