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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

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0 posted 2003-03-28 10:06 AM

from the winds that could
be seen
the multitude and their being.
that which we came from

a timeless comfort, shroud
by mystery
that they brought and knew
of our moments trace.

to look and cry
for the dunes
and the knights in the sky

they said
Maybe another time

Their faith will----

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-03-28 06:44 PM

Mysticpoe~
What a lovely, contemplative piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BSC

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2 posted 2003-03-28 08:16 PM

Mysticpoe ~ I really like this, gives one pause to ponder,~ "that they brought and knew
of our moments trace" ~ wonderful line... Bonnie

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

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3 posted 2003-03-29 11:45 AM

In particular, I liked the mind picture I received from your poem of the knights in the sky ...made me think a bit about the apocalypse. Good job.

-Bob

mysticpoe
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4 posted 2003-03-30 09:18 AM

Hi Marge, Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read.

mysticpoe

mysticpoe
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5 posted 2003-03-30 09:21 AM

Thank you Bonnie, it's nice to see that some do understand what I write. When at times I think I go deeper than I should.

mysticpoe

mysticpoe
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6 posted 2003-03-30 09:29 AM

Thanks for reading Bob, I always felt that the sky has always been that which seperates us from the awe of life. Or maybe it connects us? Still wondering about that. Just the same, the sky seems infinite. A word that always seems to instill hope for us.

mysticpoe

Mistletoe Angel

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7 posted 2003-04-04 10:21 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I too thought of the apocalypse reading this, faith will find a way through and He will be our savior all the way through! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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