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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2009-08-11 04:30 PM





A white cathedral atop a hillcrest
sits in majestic elegance,
its grandeur, stark and sleek,
the zenith of worship man dares to reach.

From below the hill’s slope,
grass is dying with summer heat,
And I, parched to my very soul
enters His house begging for His grace.

How refreshing to cross a threshold
into a place of silence and peace,
life's ordinary rituals left behind,
be immersed in His awesome presence.



© Copyright 2009 Josefina Costales - All Rights Reserved
jjbreunig3
Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 423
Maine, USA
1 posted 2009-08-12 09:56 AM


A delightful piece; nothing can compare to being in His Presence; we only have life because of Him, having transferred His breath to Adam and subsequently us. --Joe

Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd

RainbowQueen
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since 2009-08-12
Posts 10
WA., USA
2 posted 2009-08-12 01:32 PM


I enjoyed the imagery you brought to my minds eye with this.
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