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whatsup773
New Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 6
Texas

0 posted 2008-12-02 07:17 PM


THIS IS IT THE END OF MISERY.PAIN HAS PASSED BY. THE NIGHT IS NOW DAY.YOUR MERCY HAS WASHED MY SIN AWAY.I KNOW NOT ALL  OF YOU WANT TO HEAR  WHAT I HAVE TO SAY.BUT SOMEONE NEEDS TO SAY IT BEFORE ITS TO LATE.I FOUND THE ERROR IN MY WAYS.ALWAYS FALLING NEVER ABLE TO HOLD MYSELF UP.I WAS SO WEAK I NEEDED YOU TO LEAD ME AND SHOW ME.YOUR THE ONLY ONE WHO KNOWS ME MY AMBITIONS MY DREAMS.YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE WHO COULD SAVE ME.I HAD TO BECOME DEAD TO MYSELF TO BECOME ALIVE IN YOU.NOW I LIVE MY LIFE ON MY KNEES CAUSE THIS IS ALL FOR YOU NOT ME.PLEASE LORD SAVE ME FROM MY HELL.

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what_hope?
New Member
since 2008-12-10
Posts 9
sc
1 posted 2008-12-13 12:07 PM


i like this one it has a truth to it


Vestibular Bard
Member
since 2008-12-11
Posts 284
New York
2 posted 2008-12-13 10:49 AM


I cast my soul into the wind,
Its superstitions bid farewell,
And by and by my soul returned,
Whispering softly; “I am hell”.

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