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Allstaria22
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2008-07-18 09:53 PM


The devil was here today
trying to get me to go
with him
he said it’s easier there
where
he lives
easier to live
with money
and sex
and selfish pursuits
of my body
the secret wants of my
soul
I could have it all
he told me
all the toys
and friends
I could ever imagine
beauty from a bottle
lovers by the legion
anything
but You.

the devil was here today
telling me
this burden was Your fault
Your sick and twisted way
of teaching me
‘nothing’ he said ‘is taught
but pain and suffering’
there is no pain where he lives
just the callus way
to not care about others
‘who cares about them’ he said

the devil was here today
stretching out his hand
and inviting me to come with him
“what of God?’ I asked
“don’t think of Him child. He gives
you all these trials and burdens.
I offer a life free of Him and all His lessons’

the devil was here today
offering me so much
yet nothing
I looked around my world
saw tears and heartache
yet joy and peace
hope and comfort
and then I saw God’s smile in
a rainbow
and felt His touch
in the wind

the devil was here today
offering me everything
but God and Love
I’ll take the sorrow
that shows me joy
and the heartache that
shows me life
and peace in the palm of my
Father’s hands

the devil was here today
but I sent him back to hell
with empty hands and
an empty heart
but knew he would be back
to try again
and tempt me away

but nothing can pluck me
from God’s hands.




Isaiah 1:18

"Everybody loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" -All Together Seperate

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Moonkist
Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-07-25 07:55 PM


I know that devil
All too well
He tempted me too
At the gates of hell
I tried his way
for a while, and found
I could not live that way
A life empty and upside down...
Thank goodness I looked up
And found God waiting
Now a satisfying life I live
And there's more to come, oh the anticipating
.
.
.
your poem inspired me... enjoyed the read and glad to hear there was a happy ending for you...

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2008-08-07 08:48 PM


Your poem is very very true to life and true to how the Devil tempts us with his lies and deception. Very well written.

God bless and loved your testimony that nothing, absolutely nothing, can tempt you away or separate you from God's Love.

Good job,

-Bob

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