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Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
0 posted 2007-10-24 02:42 PM

Grey mists of dawn,
Are drawn by her kiss,
The darkness soon gone,
We are left to utter bliss.

Soft rays of colour, twist,
Through the silky sky,
The land wakes dew kissed,
All around the trees sigh.

Morning’s first rays,
Stroke the mountains eyes,
Her soft, sweet touch lingers then stays,
Briefly before she must rise

She waits until darks cover,
When she can return to the arms, of her lover.


The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy.
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Member Seraphic
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with you
1 posted 2007-10-24 03:28 PM

this is gorgeous...really


Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
2 posted 2007-10-24 04:56 PM

Pretty damn good Abbeon.
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