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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-02 04:00 PM


          
          As the fire whispers
          To the flame -
             "Dance...dance..."

          As the moon whispers
          To the tide -
             "Rise...rise..."

          And as the sun whispers
          To the trees -
             "Grow...grow..."

          So the Beloved whispers
          To my heart -
             "Love...love..."

  I hear the whisper....and answer..."yes...yes."




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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-02-02 04:06 PM


Beautiful Eric!
I absolutely love your style of writing.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-02 04:15 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, I just love this, sweet friend, this is sunshine and the smile is so contagious another can feel the bright light of this! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

cinnamongirl
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3 posted 2003-02-02 04:55 PM


"Yes... yes..."

May this sweet dance never end... may we all say "yes..."

Thank you...

SPIRIT
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4 posted 2003-02-02 08:47 PM


I love your style - another beautiful post. Thank you.
Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2003-02-02 11:04 PM


You have a style all your own and it is lovely.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2003-02-04 11:46 AM


Again, your words are full of soft imagery... Soft to the touch of the mind and soft to the flow of the sprit.  I do believe as you have written that we are so touched by the softness of GOD's voice to Love. (Amen) GOD Bless.

-Bob

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