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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2003-01-18 06:17 PM


DAFFODILS

Tall swaying daffodils,
In golden bloom,
With shining faces
Lit up by the sun.
One of many flowers
That nature grooms
To an individuality,
For each and every one.
Elegant and slender,
With slightly bowed heads,
Running and ruling
The springtime lands.
Some growing wild,
And some in tended beds,
Well-cared for
With gentle, loving hands.
Each one is a sample
Of God's perfected work,
For the minutest detail
Of each growing thing.
From the tiniest petal
To the tall green stalk,
A flower such as this,
Makes the heart want to sing.
Surely, such beauty,
Must bring with it, peace,
Peace of the heart,
Of the soul, of the mind.
And with it must come
The gentle release
Of the doubts,
And fears we forever find
In the hours of our each
And everyday living.
So dear God,
Please be forever giving,
The tranquility of such
As the daffodil bloom,
To cast aside despondency,
Despair and gloom.

If we traveled backwards, from end to beginning, would the road, I wonder
Be the road we traveled from beginning to end?   ©das



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jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-01-18 08:45 PM


Dear Spirit, such a peaceful poem - makes one remember God is everywhere, esp.in the things He has created - in the bounties of Nature. We don't need to look elsewhere.
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2003-01-19 02:23 AM


Dear Spirit.  In the spring I will have sixty acres of beautiful daffodils in the fields around my house.  They are indeed one of my favorites and you have described them beautifully.  Joyce
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2003-01-19 11:32 AM


sweet, sweet poem about lovely flowers


the underlining is a unique thing, a bit distracting, but that may "just be me"

is it like your "signature?"

if so, I'll just have to get used to it, eh

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

SPIRIT
Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
4 posted 2003-01-19 11:40 AM


Thank you all for nice words. Yes that is the signature I have going at the moment, always subject to change.  Ever done those maze puzzles? cannot finish it, then go to the finish and work backwards and you will probably finish it quite easily, that is where the thought came from.

If we traveled backwards, from end to beginning, would the road, I wonder
Be the road we traveled from beginning to end?   ©das



Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2003-01-19 06:39 PM




(smiles) Oh Das, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile imagining a bumblebee kissing a daffodil and spreading friendliness and purity through springs smile! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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Idaho, USA
6 posted 2003-01-20 02:35 PM


SPIRIT:  A lovely poem and I concur.  Daffodils are one of the first and most welcome of flowers in the spring. I feel as you do, that there is such wonder in the intricate detail of everything around us and God has provided a miraculous world for us.

Betty Lou Hebert

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
7 posted 2003-01-21 05:41 PM


It is wonderful that the daffodil was able to transform you in such a delightful way. I love how GOD knows exactly what will bring us inner joy and tranquillity when we come in contact with it.... Very descriptive writing.

-Bob

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