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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2006-02-08 09:23 PM


Simple Words

I'd like to bring you praises, Lord
With words not used before;
With phrases most deserving,
And no borrowed metaphor.

But I know it's my own ego
To such eloquence would aspire.
Belief in you and your dear Son
Is all that you require.

A simple "thank you" for the life
You've given me to live.
These humble words to beg that you
My sinful ways forgive.

By: Joyce 02/08/06

© Copyright 2006 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-02-08 11:10 PM


Joyce~

I'd like to bring you praises, Lord
With words not used before;
With phrases most deserving,
And no borrowed metaphor.'


I love it ... I love it ... I love it !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2006-02-09 01:07 AM


Thank you Marge.  You are always so encouraging.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2006-02-09 11:22 AM


Simply beautiful, Joyce.  You've captured the simplicity of God's request with our awed realization of His majestic role.

   Rae

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4 posted 2006-02-13 05:25 PM


Reminds me of the song "How can I say thanks for what God Hath done for me.   It's not our eloquence of words but our graditude that pleases him. Good to see you still here posting away! Always enjoy your poetry.
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